not a bad start...
but it needs sound! Even if that is stick-men, I liked the style you took with it, nice fast smooth motion. BUT I could hardly read what they were saying, maybe try typing what they say? or see if you can get some voice actors (ask around forums).
Other than those things it wasn't too bad.
it may not be copied...
but it still isn't worth the name madness combat. Its an improve ment upon your first one seeing as how you did your own thing (was outdoors and all). BUT ythere is no movement, its not smooth.
If you watch the normal madnesscombats you will see the characters dont just move, they walk, their head ops up and down a bit their arms sway, their feet move. Your characters just glide across the screen super fast. So, keep working on it and a movie of yours might deserve the madness combat name.
first, nice art!
second, wow that was a lot of violence.
third, that rocked!
honestly, every time I hear that song a shiver (or two) runs down my spine.
Have the guy do something other than stand there and think about stuff... maybe have him use the sabre
I'm not a big fan of clock crew, but this was cool. No annoying "robo" voices, almost original story, could use a bit of work on the script even if this is just a prologue.
Want to see the actual movie/series
and I thought the first one sucked...
I'm a fan of the original madnesscombat...
and this wasnt up to par :/
For one, it needs a loading screen, after watching a bit the music stopped and slowed down a LOT because it didn't load. Movement was too stiff and motion needed to be more fluid. Maybe use a different location for this story, and even though you got his permission, it doesnt mean you need to almost copy him in the way the movie unfolds.
coulda have been a lot better, but could have been a lot worse
its a wannabe madness combat/redeemer/...
but not bad
??? ok.. you give me a overall 4, because my style was like combatwatever yet you give me a 9 in style? ?
when I saw the first one, some of the animation told me it had to be ren&stimpy inspiered, and to my joy the pre loader of 3 has the artist wearing a stimpy shirt... "jooooooyyyyy!!!" I can only say that this series of movies rocks, and I want to see more.
Kick ass art mixed with a fast paced techno beat. A single word to describe this is 'DAMN!!!'
I suppose the only way to make this better, on my own part, would be if I could understand the japanese just to amuse myself while I watch it again and again.
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